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Dr-Slump

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Mathematical!

Oh god! Not you again, arcsinus! D:

Ahahaha great song! :D Changed just the right time, as my comarade said below. Really solid beat. Check out my tunes!

Dr-Slump.

BenInkEntertainment responds:

Will do, thank you very much for the comments!

Cool!

It's starts very softly, and gets really ravy. What I can suggest for your future songs is that you compress a bit your instruments, and please pump up that drum kick! Dancing techno music needs a powerful kick, to make people jump off the floor. Try compressing it too and adding some more effects to widen the kick, so that it would sound like a really powerful synth kick. Yeah, I prefer using a true drum kit for my songs, but when i used to do dance musics, i always forgot about that. Try to hear from the best dance producer on ng. You'll see what i mean. Their kicks are always ultra powerful.

I can't think of any other tips now. Check out my tunes!

Peace.

DenVessidence responds:

ya i often make my songs with headphones so sometimes the percussion comes out too hard because it sounds soft in my phones. this time i over compesated a little and made it too soft.

Tight!

Great song! I've started to make hip hop too. Some tips would be helpful... hehe. What program did you use? You only used sample? Other than those question, amazing song! Peace.

Sirhc7000 responds:

I use Reason 4.0 for my beats and yes, it is computer software. But I use and external MIDI device so I can record things live.

Thx for the review.

Amazing!!!

Ahaha i wonder how to do 8-bit music in FL. That should be a challenge. Nice music. Great adaption to 8-bit style. Neet :). Check out my tunes!

pheel responds:

All you need is the right plug ins :)
I will do when I get a second :D

Thanks for reviewing :)

Congrats man!

I'm really proud for your success man. Grats, you've made it to the top!

Hmmmm....

Hmm, i don't know what to say XD you reviewed a song of mine, so here i am, after a long while reviewing yours. And it lacks of a lot thing man. Sorry to say that, cuz im not a pro myself... have you tried some techno generators like sytrus, vanguard, zeta+, toxic III or poiZone? You should man... and try to put some more active bass, master your drumming skills and cool effects. oh well, i hope to see something better, so i wont discourage you and im going to vote 4/5.

Peace out.
Dr. Slump

yeah, really nothing to say

Cool song man! nothing to say on this song... every thing is in its right place... the pads are really nicely used. Your main melody is really nice and clear. Way to go! =)
Oh well, i wanted to do a really hardcore trance... i didnt want to go smooth this time xD that's why it's kinda "hard". And you find the same kind of beat in a lot of raves. Oh well, back to you song, nothing to say to you dude, amazing! keep up the good work =D

omg mastah \o/

yeah, you're getting pro... =D awesome music, it deserve a place in my iPod... i guess haha, AWESOME DUDE!!! KEEP YOUR DAILY TRAINING!! =D and yeah, you're just getting better ;)

Envy responds:

o.O? What a nice IPod you have there ^.^

-trains-

Good effort, but you need to improve...

Yeah, i think you got a good start, but you need to improve man. Like, why don't you check Sytrus? and see the different presets? They really help you in your tunes. Oh, i would recommend you to search for a FL tutorial. You need to learn how to use modulation, how to create a melody, how to use the mixer... well, ill give you some tips, to create a good melody, start with a 4 note bassline =) then, transform this f4 note bassline in a 8 note lead instrument then 16 vice versa. Don't give up!!

gfxdemon responds:

Heh, I took a bit of a break after this one... I'm just starting (in comparison to everything else), and I've found that it helps to have critique from others. Thanks for all the advice!

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